29 July 2010, 11:35 am
Here is a page of my story, let me know what you think of it, ---- Lilian and her three dogs waited outside a house made entirely out of logs. It was cold out, and the hour of them were freezing to death, so to speak. Lilian, a girl with shoulder length wavy hair, knocked on the door repeatedly, hoping that someone would answer her. After a few moments, a somewhat obese character opened the door and stepped over the threshold. Lilian took a glance at the person's face, only to realize that he had the head of a pig. "May I help you?" the large pig asked the girl. "Yes, can we please come inside, er, we've lost out way while hunting and we just can't stay out here in this cold for much longer." she said trembling a bit. The pig looked over Lilian's shoulder noticing her three dogs, a Lasa apso, a german shepherd and a labrador, all sitting there with steam coming from their mouths as they panted incessantly. The pig looked at his forehead, not knowing wether to allow the girl and her dogs inside his humble place. "Ah sure what the hey," the pig responded all of a sudden, "come in, make yourself at home." The pig's place was very well lit. It had several frames with pictures of his family and friends, along with glass cups on top of drawers. "Oh thank you sir, my name is Lilian," "My name is Mr. Pig, would you like something to eat?" Lilian's face changed. She signaled her dogs to seize the pig... -... Read More »
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