29 July 2010, 11:28 am
So, i made up a story last night, and this is what ive got so far. What do you think of it? how could i improve it? what you like? what you don't like? ... Oh, and its a teenage girl story also. "Morning Mum" Cara said, trailing down the stairs at 11.20 on the first day of the summer holidays running her fingers through her beautiful blonde hair, "Can i have a.. Oh my god! Where are you going?" she said, as she walked through the living room door, looking at her mum, dressed in a gorgeous white shirt with ruffles down the sides of the buttons, and an elegant black puff skirt, with her hair styled with a glamourous bofeut on the top, and the rest straight. "On a date!" said her mum, squeeking at the same time, "And hes coming to pick me up, so get some clothes on!" "Urgh.. fine" Cara groaned, "but, who actually with?" "A man from work, hes lovely!" Cara looked at her mum suspiciously, "Mum" she said, "You work in a cafe that charges 99p for a bun, most of the people that work there are probably phsycos" she said laughing "Oh, well thanks for the positive comment about my job, but he doesnt work there, or even go there, i saw him while i was out at lunch" mum said smiling. "Oh, so he aint a cheapo then, sounds alright to me" winked Cara "Yeah, and you STAY AWAY! Ill tell you more about him when ive been on this date, now its 11.30, so he'll be here in about 2 hours, but dont worry your not getting left alone, he's giving you some money to go to the cinemas, your going to watch a movie with his son" she smiled. Cara groaned "Oh, so im going to be left with a little kid watching some lame telletubies movie? No, id rather go out with my friends thanks" she said walking out of the room. "Oh no you dont, he isn't a little kid, hes 14, just like you! So you'll do as i say, and watch that movie, please!" said mum with a little smile on her face. "Oh, alright" Cara sighed. "But if hes a weirdo, then im outta here, deal?" "Deal" as they shook hands. *What if hes really nice* she thought, so as fast as she could, Cara ran upstairs and looked in her wardrobe at what to wear. *So, shall i go for pretty, but tomboy, or pretty, and girly?* she thought. Pretty and girly i think! She took out some white high waisted shorts, and a light brown vest top, and picked out her new white peep toe shoes. "Perfect" she said to herself. *Urgh, i need a shower*, She thought, so she ran to the bathroom, turned on the shower and off she was. She got out, and it turned 11.55, she popped on her dressing gown, then did her hair, dried it and straightened it. it was 12.10. She hurried up, put on her makeup, foundation, blusher, and mascara, but made sure there was just about enough to make herself look nice. *Not bad*, she thought. 12.20, and in 10 minutes they were going to be here, but then the doorbell rung. "That'll be them" shouted mum up to Cara. "Alright, im nearly ready" Cara sprinted back into the bathroom, brushed her teeth, then went back to her room and got on her clothes, and put on some Britney Spears - Fantasy perfume. *Hmm, accesories, which shall i use* but then, she thought for earrings, her gold flowers, for bracelets, her brown and gold bangles, for necklace, her gold love heart, and then she was done, and she looked stunning. She walked down the stairs, and there was Mum, her date and his son. "Im Gary" said mums date, waving "and Im Kai" said his son, smiling with his pearl white teeth. "Im Cara" she said. Kai was wearing some light blue jeans, with rips in them, halfway down his highly squeezable bum, so you could see his black and white calvin klein underwear, and a white tank top, with some white decathlons. He looked gorgeous, and im sure mum thought gary did too. He was wearing some medium blue jeans, with a sleeveless top, and some white adidas trainers. They were both so tan, and one thing Cara noticed, was Kai's lovely styled hair, it was nearly the same colour as hers, and all pulled to one side, just like celebrity teenage singer Justin Bieber's. Gary's hair was black, and spiked up. Alright Cara, me and Gary are going shopping for a couple of hours, then were going to his for a little while, then going for a meal, and then for a few drinks, so we'll be back in the early hours of tomorrow morning, which means he and Kai will be sleeping, Kai can have my room, and me and Gary can sleep on the pull out sofa ,if you dont mind?" she said happily "Yeah, i dont mind" Gary said, as they walked out the door. "So, What do you wanna watch?" said Kai, "Ive heard theres a new comedy out, called Funny Friends, if you like comedy that is.." "Yeah, sounds good" said Cara, not really interested in what he is saying... Read More »
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